Where is the final design and comments on your intent so that we can understand why you did the advertisement. CONCEPT: A place for learning California history targeted to the high schoolers. Your text mirrors the image, which is sophisticated and yet accessible. A unique, historical, inspirational aimed at the teenager. Knowledge is power with Watts Towers. Promoting Watts tower as a part of Californian History to High Schoolers and teachers
DESIGN: Clean and legible and structured. The text does look like a tower, going down the left side with blocks of text movie up the page, and there are 3 towers and 3 blocks of text reinforces the 3 towers. The image works well. Monochromatic, black with a touch of blue. The color on your blog is so much clearer than the actual printed version – perhaps that is the paper or the saturation of the color. The slogan stands forward, which says it is the most important use of hierarchy. You have captured you designer while referencing the structure of education. Good use of value. You really worked hard using the camera, cutting and pasting and the end result was a great design. BLOG: you have some a solid piece of documentation with your ideas. When you present your final designs You should have a statement about your final internet so that the reader does not have to look so far back in the blog Which is the last one that you presented. I can not tell from the blog? Presentation and participation: You have presented your work well, but you need to really stand up for your beliefs and be a bit more solid in your discussion. You are a very talented young woman with some great ideas. I would like to see you participate more in class so that you can get and give some solid discussions about the works!!
Where is the final design and comments on your intent so that we can understand why you did the advertisement.
ReplyDeleteCONCEPT: A place for learning California history targeted to the high schoolers. Your text mirrors the image, which is sophisticated and yet accessible. A unique, historical, inspirational aimed at the teenager. Knowledge is power with Watts Towers.
Promoting Watts tower as a part of Californian History to High Schoolers and teachers
DESIGN: Clean and legible and structured. The text does look like a tower, going down the left side with blocks of text movie up the page, and there are 3 towers and 3 blocks of text reinforces the 3 towers. The image works well. Monochromatic, black with a touch of blue. The color on your blog is so much clearer than the actual printed version – perhaps that is the paper or the saturation of the color. The slogan stands forward, which says it is the most important use of hierarchy. You have captured you designer while referencing the structure of education. Good use of value. You really worked hard using the camera, cutting and pasting and the end result was a great design.
BLOG: you have some a solid piece of documentation with your ideas. When you present your final designs You should have a statement about your final internet so that the reader does not have to look so far back in the blog Which is the last one that you presented. I can not tell from the blog?
Presentation and participation: You have presented your work well, but you need to really stand up for your beliefs and be a bit more solid in your discussion. You are a very talented young woman with some great ideas. I would like to see you participate more in class so that you can get and give some solid discussions about the works!!